Jan 15
When writing the dialogue for this scene it suddenly dawned on me that Chelsea didn't know the first thing about her sister, Corrine. Perhaps the two can do a bit of retail therapy when this is all over. 
When writing the dialogue for this scene it suddenly dawned on me that Chelsea didn't know the first thing about her sister, Corrine. Perhaps the two can do a bit of retail therapy when this is all over.
Not to be too much of a pain, but in the second panel, in the lower speech bubble, I think you want “find” rather than “fine”.
“He could always find my happy place.”
I was late on this one and so uploaded it before it could be edited. It’s fixed now. Thanks!
Just a proof reading thing…did you mean to use “fine”, rather than find? As in “Find my happy place”.
Pah, kids! When will they learn that much power is boring?
Since we seem to be proofreading, did some of the layers from the previous page spill over on this? Looks like there is some smudges or some kind of bleed in the lower right corner, where I was expecting just the black border.
… though I suppose this could be some cleverness intended for print, or even serve a purpose on the screen; though if so, it was clearly too clever for me to pick up on.
That’s what happens when I add effects after I’ve flattened the image. :p
The only tning I could think of to make Mel happy would be a set of powerful guns, which isn’t exactly productive in this situation.
Come to think of it Mel gets on well with Sebo, doesn’t she?…
ITYM Beige.
If Chelsea doesn’t know what makes her sister happy, it must simply be something she hasn’t been told. Possibilities are endless.